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Title: Dark
Author: Roadstergal
Rating: PG.
Fandom: Tomb Raider (movie)
Pairing: Hillary/Bryce
Warnings: Minor slash and hurt.
Disclaimer: They're not mine; I get nothing for this.

Last of the trio that I dashed off in the last few days. Constructive criticism very welcome.
http://www.roadstergal.info/misc/dark.rtf

Comments

[tinnean.livejournal.com]

But you'll be writing more? Or is this as far as the muses want to go? Nothing is more of a pain than people demanding more when that's all there is, so I won't. But I really would like more. 0:-)

The only thing I noticed was voice misspelled with a double 'o'.

As I mentioned, I really like these two characters, and there isn't much written about them. I also like that you gave hints of Hilary's past (the army boots and helping Lara train and that even with a broken wrist he was trying to escape. I couldn't blame Bryce for just lying there when he had a bone sticking out of his leg.) BTW, did you ask about this on the med list?

Bryce's nervous reaction when Hilary walked into his hospital room was cute, and I was glad when Hilary shut him up with his mouth.

Thank you so much for posting these three, and as I've said, if you'd like to write more, I'll certainly be here reading them.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thank you muchly! I'll correct that. I agree, there isn't enough out there with these two. I do think that yer traditional Jeeves wouldn't last long with Lara, so I do have some ideas about Hillary's past. And Bryce's, too. The bunnies attack me totally at random, so when they're active, I just write a lot. I'm planning on doing more.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, and I know not of the med list... any feedback on the technical accuracy of anything I write is most appreciated!

[tinnean.livejournal.com]

It's fanfic_med@yahoogroups.com

Lots of good information about drugs, injuries, and illnesses.

There had been a question about a compound fracture, and when Bryce turned up with a compound fracture to his leg, I wondered if you had posed the question.