"21" - Mickey/Ben

[white-lady-111.livejournal.com]

Be gentle, this is my first completed fic in over a year, and it's a pitiful 287 words! It was actually started months ago but got stuck in my notebook until today when I finally typed it. It was a long time coming, especially since I started writing Mickey/Ben in my head from the trailer!

Title:

I come back to my room that first early morning in Vegas, giddy from the exhilaration of winning and sleep deprivation, to find Mickey waiting for me.

« Good job, Ben. » He says with his usual wry smile as he takes the chips from me.

I laugh, nearly drunk with victory, we sort-of hug, my hyper-sensitized senses focus on the smell of whiskey on his breath, the feel of it against my neck. His palm unerringly finds my hard-on and presses.

I gasp, stumble, nearly fall over but his eyes hold me up while the rest of him pushes me towards the bed. When I do collapse, I'm face-down on the bed and naked from the waist down. Mickey's hands are demanding and I try not to think about what he's doing. It hurts unpleasantly at first and as the pain grows the more I want. It stops and the next push burns unbearably, I know he's penetrating me, taking over my body the way he's taken over my life.

I think I laugh, maybe I cry, the high of winning battles behind my closed eyelids with the old familiar taste of loss. I can’t remember my orgasm but I know it happened, I feel it slipping away from me as shame creeps hotly up the back of my neck.

I’m so certain Mickey’s gone that I nearly jump out of my skin when I feel his hand slapping my bare ass.

“Good job, Ben.” He repeats, taking my winnings with him as he goes.

Every time I win after that, the small clicking noise of the chips in the bag makes me flush with shame (lust?).

No hint of this incident goes into my essay.


Pairing: Ben/Mickey
Summary: PWP
Rating: R
Warnings: Dubious consent. The incredibly obvious, cheesy title can be blamed on Mamma Mia.
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters, movie, etc.

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Comments

[spock74.livejournal.com]

Am I just really out of it? I cannot for the life of me figure out what fandom this is. Help an old lady out?

[white-lady-111.livejournal.com]

"21", a movie about a bunch of college kids counting cards in Vegas. Starring Kevin Spacey (Mickey, their teacher) and Jim Sturgess (Ben, math genius). Came out earlier this year. Hope this helps!

[spock74.livejournal.com]

Yeah, now I feel like a complete tool. I didn't even look at the subject line. Der. I know what 21 is. I just can't, apparently, read very well. Fun story, btw! It's somehow cute and sexy at the same time.

[hammerxsword.livejournal.com]

That nails their dynamic pretty bloody well actually! And in less than 300 words. Good job!